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Location: Canada
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Hey buuddddy! I like what you've done here, you've taken your old style and remixed it into your own, something i respect you for ;)
If there's one thing i notice with your animation, its that you're working with two's at 24 fps. I know this is a personal preference with animators, but might i recommend switching to two's with 30 fps?
Working with two's at 24 is like working on one's at 12 fps, and we all know that 12 fps looks choppy. Suffice to say, this video, while the animation was good, did look a bit choppy. Were you to up your framerate to 30, it would be like drawing one's at 15 FPS which looks a lot crisper and smoother.
This is just my personal opinion though, i hope it provided some insight.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Guess it was worth taking that year break from animating to practice drawing.
And, nah, I'm actually working on four's in most cases (I KNOW, I KNOW). With three weeks and wanting to put out the most realistic animation that I can, I had to sacrifice the smoothness/frame rate. I was planning to go back later if I finished before the deadline, but well.
I'd totally do 30 fps, but the standard is 24 fps and I want to get as comfortable with the norm as I can (if that makes sense). Thanks for the tips, though!
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Extremely well animated sir, especially the whole "everyone getting hit by the car" scene, you definitely outdid yourself there sir ^^
Author's Response:
:D.
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Luis got phished.
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It's a true tragedy.
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Just a fun lil game to pass the time, so much easier with a wacom tablet i might add ;)
Good job sir ^_^
Author's Response:
Oooh nice suggestion. You can also play it on the Wii ^^ Thanks for the awesome score!
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Orly?
Author's Response:
Yarly!
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Overall its pretty funny, you have good takes on lots of stuff and it works out well. However, i feel that the animation quality holds it back from being something truly great.
Work on your animation skills, don't be afraid to try things you think will fail miserably, as things like that usually end well :P
Good luck on your future projects
Author's Response:
Thanks I'm glad you liked it.
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Shouldn't people respect Terrorism? Nice flash, work on animation, make the jokes lolier
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ewww you're into loli?
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I can tell from other reviews below this that the swf that i'm not going to watch is crap, but i hope people see this comment and think "hey, maybe i should read the Author comment"
I agree with what you say in every way, and I know its happened to me where I felt i deserved more than the score i got for a flash, because something like "awesome" overshadowed it. (not even Egoraptors awesome, like...awesome racer or something)
Thank you for writing this up, just next time upload a better swf :P
Author's Response:
A few months ago ashford pride made a movie with a foreboding title. It was called "Awesome Grounds".
Well ladies and gentlemen, that's might as well what this site should be called (at least right now), with the top row on the front page slot dedicated to an "awesome" movie and an "awesome" parody, an "awesome" t-shirt in the newgrounds store, and pretty much every "awesome" movie in the top 100, along with han's "awesome's creed".
I can't go to newgrounds with seeing something not about egoraptor or his coveted video game parody series. It makes me wonder sometimes if pursuing anything but half-assed cartoons making mildly funny observations about video games laced with profanity is even worth it. Truly, they are what bring the masses of 13-year olds to this site, and thus increases traffic and competition in the internet world. But you have to ask yourself, with this sort of two-bit audience increasing in numbers, are they really interested in watching anything else?
I understand that it's a dog eat dog world in the online entertainment business, and to compete you have to pretty much put up content that a majority of internet browsers would click on. This includes either women or video games. Things they already know they want. And that's all they want. They sign up, watch more, and come back and do it again later. They're trained to know that what they want is easily accessible and is promoted all over the site.
Original content is often shuffled off to the bottom of the page, or never gets any attention to begin with. Now comes into play the whole 'they won't click on it unless there's a boob for the icon', etc etc. That's because they've been fashioned to think that way.
I'm not saying i have all the mysterious answers to the way people's minds work. But this much is true - if all people click on are breasts and video game icons, and you give them breasts and video game icons, you're not pushing the envelope.
Newgrounds is the epitome of user-generated content. We already have a massive advantage over youtube in the fact that making a cartoon involves so much more creativity than snappily editing your webcam footage. So instead of 200 cartoons coming out every minute, we have 200 cartoons coming out every day. That gives someone a better chance of breaking out and being discovered for his hard work, and a reward for a job well done.
But in the same way that viewers are trained that they don't have to go out of their way to avoid original content they would otherwise enjoy, authors are becoming more and more disenchanted with their personal creations and are turning to nerd culture icons and cheap tactics to get viewers.
I can't tell you how many animators I have spoken to that have shunned their own creations in favor of sub-pop culture parody and disjointed scripts sprinkled with toilet humor and profanity. a cartoon catering to everyone who's forgotten what cartoons are all about. And here we are shoving away everything about cartoons that was originally appealing and magical, because we're pretty much forced to.
I'm not pointing the finger at any one person here. I think it's part of the bigger picture - bigger than Newgrounds, too. But if people really care about the future of cartoons and animation, we wouldn't be seeing this kind of blatant favoritism.
People will find what they want if they want it. They don't need to be spoon fed it all.
For thirty years animators who strive to create something genuinely unique have gotten nothing but a slap in the face. It's sickening and it has to stop someday, before they all disappear.
Lastly, this post is not about me. I'm not writing this out of self-pity, bitterness or spite. I'm being honest. I care a lot about the future of animation, and what I see around me is very troubling. The industry is bad enough, but where the future lies is in the small corners of the animation world. Newgrounds is one of them. I spend a lot of time trying to encourage and teach frame-by-frame animation, and creating your own characters and scripts. That is what is important
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THIS IS PROBABLY EXACTLY WHAT IT WAS LIKE FOR LIL FULPY TOO!!!
kinda a challenge to not die :P
Just imagine what that kids gonna say when he's 14 and finds this game
Author's Response:
lmao, that'll be awesome. i can't wait for that day :P
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Well i enjoyed it, still playing right now but its not too hard, im sure it will pick up though. There have been a few issues with the collision detection though, i definetly went through the last target when i had got all the green ones, and it didn't pick up :(
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review mate, are you sure you didn't exceed the maximum number of bounces?
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